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Sunday, November 16, 2008

Haiku #75

I am your field,
wood, dark air,
oh luminous deer

2 comments:

  1. I haven't commented, but I've loved your haiku.

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  2. Here I envision a tiny field and forest inside of your head and heart populated by swift, alert, and graceful thoughts and feelings. It is so crisp. My mom sent me fall leaves in the mail, I have a friend in California who misses fall also so I mailed her some of your haikus, I hope you don't mind.

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