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Sunday, October 19, 2008

Revision, Revision

Worked a while on the first chapter of the novel last night and today. I long had suspected the chapter was overfull, that I was dumping too much information on the reader and not developing the characters enough. I worked to remedy that, and I am happy with the changes.

3 comments:

  1. I love reading about your process in writing, the things you see and your thoughts.

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  2. That's got to be a good feeling!

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  3. Good for you!!! Keep those magical wheels turning and remember those blissful creative days this summer.... I hope you brought a jar of sand home!

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